Have I Done Any Good?This article was written for Mormon Insights, which publishes short articles for young adults. My edits address some concerns the author included with the draft, as well as a few suggestions for minor improvements.
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Come What MayThis article was written for Mormon Insights. The author included several concerns, so some of my comments address those specifically. The article length is generally 250 words or less, so many edits addressed that as well.
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The Miracle of PeaceThis article was also written for Mormon Insights, which publishes short articles for young adults. Many of my edits were aimed to bring the word count down and improving clarity.
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